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On Thursday I was at Los Altos High and had the pleasure of talking to three English classes–one senior and two sophomore sections. The kids were so wonderful that it made me nostalgic for those classroom days when I taught English.
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In the 40 minutes I had, I told them a little about who I was and what I wrote, read from two of my YA novels, then gave them a 10 minute writing exercise, saving the last 5-10 minutes for Q and A.
I based the exercise on beginnings. A few weeks before I’d submitted sample beginnings of stories I’d written, they’d read them and we discussed what I call the EICE, /ice/, formula. Credit for this goes to Stein in Stein on Writing, and I keep it posted above my desk.
- Excite the reader’s curiosity about the character or relationship.
- Introduce the setting and tone.
- Create images for reader.
- Evoke emotions.
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Hilary Melton-Butcher says
Hi Lee – that sounds an amazing session .. and how clever to prepare the kids in advance, then you've got your handle for the session … I bet they learnt loads .. so fascinating to read – I'd love to join you too … cheers Hilary
debi o'neille says
I'm so glad I came across this post. I'm working on ideas for school visits, so reading this couldn't have come at a better time.
Julie Musil says
I didn't know you used to teach English! That's great. I've never heard of EICE. Great tip.
Last week I spoke for the first time in front of 4th and 5th graders. I was nervous but they were so much fun!
Lexa Cain says
Your visits with the three classes sound so productive. (Teens scare the hell out of me. I expect them all to be "mean girls." I don't know how you fearlessly walk right into the lion's den.) I love the EICE info. That encapsulates what's necessary in a beginning perfectly!
Nick Wilford says
What a great thing to do to engage students in writing. And that's a neat formula, I might just nab it myself!
Medeia Sharif says
That's a fantastic experience. I can't hit the classrooms since I'm already teaching, but during the summer or if I ever leave teaching, I'd love to do this.
Michelle Wallace says
I've just submitted a proposal to start a writing club at the new school I'm at… I'm looking forward to it!
I'm here to pick up the award you presented to me…
Carrie Butler says
Very cool! I've presented to an elementary school, even though they weren't exactly my buying demographic… LOL
Vanessa Morgan says
What a lovely promotional activity indeed.
Marcia says
I'm glad it went so well. It certainly sounds wonderful!
Crystal Collier says
Ooh! I love it! I totally want to get out there and hit the classrooms…but having 3 homeschooling kids at home is making it a little difficult. It will happen. Soon, I hope. Thanks for a great outline of your process!
klahanie says
Greetings Lee,
Yes and thank goodness, I have arrived. Great pawst! Thanks for sharing! Following!
It seems those school kids were taking on board what you were saying. My human and I try to write in such a way that we are "talking" to the one reader. The intimate style works for us.
I've every confidence that those students will want to read your books. Heck, I'm going to read a book about alligators overhead to my rather confused human.
The A to Z? Make the ridiculous thing go away! Gosh, I see Arlee Bird has been here. Hi Mr. Alphabet Man!
Pawsitive wishes, your starstruckest dog fan,
Penny the Jack Russell dog and modest internet superstar!
DMS says
This sounds like so much fun! I love school visits for so many reasons. Connecting with readers is so exciting and so is the chance to meet teachers and librarians. I bet the kids loved having you in to their classrooms. 🙂
~Jess
Nas says
Enjoy! The school presentation sounds great.
Carol Kilgore says
Your school presentation sounds great. I'm sitting out A-Z this year. Have fun!
Tyrean Martinson says
Sounds like an awesome experience! I would love to do something like that. Glad you had fun!
Elizabeth Seckman says
I've spoken to Honors classes in high school. It was a lot of fun and a great reminder that there are still good kids in this world!
Barbara Watson says
From one English teacher to another, there's nothing like connecting with teens (or kids) over books.
Stephen Tremp says
I remember little things I would take away when I was in school. I still have a few in a junk box. One such item is a novelty size pair of moraccas that for some reason mean a lot to me.
Empty Nest Insider says
I'm sure that the students enjoyed it as much as you did! It's also nice that you included special keepsakes for them to remember you by.
Julie
Christine Rains says
That sounds like it went awesome! I'd like to go to one of your presentations as well. 🙂 I'm a good student.
M. J. Joachim says
Very helpful formula. High school kids are cool. I remember when I used to substitute teach in their classrooms, and we had a ball.
Lady Lilith says
I really enjoy seeing the perspectives of children. They usually have such a different point of view.
L. Diane Wolfe says
Anytime I've visited a school, I've done my character development exercise. It's a great way to encourage kids to write and get you (and your books) in the door.
Theresa Milstein says
Sounds like everyone got something out of your visit.
No A to Z for this year. April is too hectic. I'll enjoy reading other people's posts though.
Arlee Bird says
Excellent marketing strategy that serves as a helpful lesson to the students. This is a great way to cultivate your potential audience.
Lee
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C. Lee McKenzie says
And it's fun for me. It also keeps me on my toes.
DEZMOND says
that sounds wonderfully creative!
C. Lee McKenzie says
Let's hope they did, too! But I got good feedback, so that was nice.
Beverly Stowe McClure says
What a great idea. I imagine the kids and teachers enjoyed your visit. The schools around here, even where I taught, have not been interested in school visits. 🙂 Oh, well.
C. Lee McKenzie says
Their loss, Beverly. Too bad.
Bish Denham says
I'd like to be at one of your school visits. I want to learn at the feet of the Mistress. 🙂
C. Lee McKenzie says
Very sweet! And I'd love it if you were there.
Natalie Aguirre says
Thanks for the tips. One of the things I'm scared of is trying to do an interesting school visit. We don't have many in our high school though. They have a full schedule of what they need to get through in class.
I really appreciate your tips. Makes me a bit less nervous.
C. Lee McKenzie says
I was nervous since I hadn't done one at this school before, but it turned out to be a great experience for me.
Angela Brown says
I like your idea of making the visit more interactive with the students so it isn't a bore to them.
C. Lee McKenzie says
So true. I always like it when I got to participate with the presenter. Still do!
Alex J. Cavanaugh says
Glad it was a huge success. That's a good exercise for the kids. I bet their beginnings were amusing.
C. Lee McKenzie says
They were and some were quite exciting.